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DouggyO.o
May 31st, 2005, 03:29 PM
Teen Years
By:Me

Everyone tells you,
they're the best years of your life.
The thing they don't tell you,
is they are all full of strife.

From a child to a teen,
in less then a year.
It's a lot to deal with,
you have to grow up fast.

As a child you're free,
as a teen you feel locked up.
A child has no worries,
A teen has a lot.

You learn the meaning of love,
you discover broken hearts.
The worries of being accepted,
are the hardest part of all.

What's the "best"
about these years.
When as a teen,
you live in fear.

i hope you liked it

Whisper
May 31st, 2005, 03:41 PM
Love dosen't exist

But yea I think its awesome!

DouggyO.o
May 31st, 2005, 04:32 PM
thanks

Anonymous
May 31st, 2005, 08:57 PM
Wow, true true true and great writing!

DouggyO.o
June 5th, 2005, 06:48 AM
thanks it took me forever to figur that one out lol

Oath
June 24th, 2005, 09:48 PM
You learn the meaning of love,
you discover broken hearts.
The worries of being accepted,
are the hardest part of all.

Yea broken hearts i so get that part!
This is what i wrote in one of my poems>

Love is a feeling I once had.
But now the word love just makes me sad.
Sometimes I wonder if love will return.
Other times I just want love to continue to burn.

If you liked my poem you can check out:
Feelings poem and Death dream

Anyways i love your poem.

DouggyO.o
June 27th, 2005, 07:24 AM
l thanks urs sounds good too :d