.....fish....

[Mannequin]

falling fate
racing date

cars collide
friendships died

utter shock
parental gawk

mouths panting
fingers dancing

father strikes his son
two appears as one

drinking
sinking

When it all comes to fate
I am the one you hate

[wizard]

your a natural poet

[unknown(to_myself)]

hey, thats really good!

[Ironic Infidel In England]

Damn, that's good.

[bahari mtoto]

Wow your an amazing poet. You used a lot of imagery I could feel the emotion in the words while reading it. Great job