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Bob_
November 8th, 2011, 10:08 PM
So yeah, I wrote this when I was in 7th grade, so the 07-08 school year.


Army, Navy, Air Force, Marines
Strong an proud, you shall be seen.
Let no one stand in your way,
For you shall be the one to say,
"I love my country, good times and bad,
It has never made me sad.
Wearing your uniform,
Dirty or clean,
Never give up,
You shall be seen.

So in retrospect, I still feel this has very deep meaning for as simple as the grammar I used in it. Go ahead and say anything about it, it's up to you.