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TheGangstaSheep
October 30th, 2011, 06:18 PM
It's about death and mortality. I suppose, how people always think about when they will die. The lyrics do not rhyme in some places and that's on purpose, just so you know and the "#" is for choruses.

Time is a predator that stalks us all our lives
The mystery behind it is unseen by the eye
The everlasting life that we thrive
Is all within the mind

When the time comes and death is near
The future is all that we fear
The image of no reality
And once it comes are we truly free

#The silence! Is oh so loud!
#Questions, of the spirit are now spoken
#Take your last breath!
#For these last words will not be forgotten

When will it end, the journey of a soul
That has passed its time
The minutes and seconds that haunt
Now mean nothing

As death approaches
There are so many posibillities
and yet the ultimate is
the end of life


#The silence! Is oh so loud!
#Questions, of the spirit are now spoken
#Take your last breath!
#For these last words will not be forgotten

Life ends in mere seconds.

ShatteredGlass
November 5th, 2011, 07:22 PM
It's a nice song, kind of dark but it's not bad, not bad at all :) I like it

TheGangstaSheep
November 6th, 2011, 07:17 PM
Thanks. I did go for a dark mood, I was thinking about mortality that day for some reason...