Bob_
October 29th, 2011, 12:09 AM
It's Your Mistake
/Everything you want, everything you had.
You threw it all away, it all ended bad.
/Or at least for me, who gave for you,
Who tried from the start to show the pigs flew.
/You can dream, and head on, like nothing ever happened,
Like everyone should just continue with you.
/You have your new pet, like it's the only one that cared,
As if none before even fared.
/Well I got some news and you're not gonna like it,
He'll take anyone, desperate for regretable s**t.
/I'm not one to judge, but wow you're stupid,
For giving anything, for trusting some kid.
//But hey, it's YOUR mistake, mind's not clear- and your world is fake.
//Hey, hey, your mistake! You never looked back, Life's yours to take!
(Rythmic solo/no singing)
/You can't E-vin feel the pain,
Eye's like rivers and heart aflame!
/You don't even feel ashamed,
When you needed help like noone came.
YEAAAHHhhhhh......
#No matter what happens, no matter who it is,
No matter who they are or what it is they did.
+Did you ever really care? Have you lied this whole time?
Did you ever truely mean that 3 word line?
+Why'd you do it now, and not back then?
What happened at the time that made HIM a f**king 10?
+You spent all that time, saying how you'd try.
Why even bother, continue all these lies?
+Coulda told the truth, coulda fixed the trust,
But you threw it in the rain, watched it sit and rust.
+Explain to me your thoughts, what goes through your head,
You stabbed it in the heart, felt nothing when it was dead.
(Beats fade into singing)
/I did everything I could, what I thought I should.
D*mn, I was wrong. Noww you're no good.
/You've given me a reason to try somethin' new...
But I hope you know... that won't. be. you.
//Hey, it's, YOUR mistake! Mind's not clear- and your world is fake!
//Hey! Hey! Your mistake! Never looked back, now you're startin' to flake.
(Music)
/Have you ever thought, of what was?
Have you ever thought, of what he really wants?
/You're so caught up with your new guy,
You let him get away with ev-ree lie.
/Now all's said and done, and I'm still One.
You are gone, and I'm livin' on... a brand new dawwwnnnn..........
Yes, it's cheesy, but whatever. The organization system;
/Normal singing line(s)
//chorus
#Start of rapping portion
+rapping lines
(Music/solo)Me attempting to compose music and describe it
So if you want to know what the goal was for it to sound like, my infuences that I listen to or thought fit here, these are a few different bands/artists I had in mind: Blink-182 for the punkish rock, Katy Perry, The "White kid raps fast" youtuber for the rapping, Plain white T's, and OneRepublic. Best of luck understanding that, though.
I know I need to improve a LOT, so I went to people who understand it best for some feedback. Please don't destroy me. =P
/Everything you want, everything you had.
You threw it all away, it all ended bad.
/Or at least for me, who gave for you,
Who tried from the start to show the pigs flew.
/You can dream, and head on, like nothing ever happened,
Like everyone should just continue with you.
/You have your new pet, like it's the only one that cared,
As if none before even fared.
/Well I got some news and you're not gonna like it,
He'll take anyone, desperate for regretable s**t.
/I'm not one to judge, but wow you're stupid,
For giving anything, for trusting some kid.
//But hey, it's YOUR mistake, mind's not clear- and your world is fake.
//Hey, hey, your mistake! You never looked back, Life's yours to take!
(Rythmic solo/no singing)
/You can't E-vin feel the pain,
Eye's like rivers and heart aflame!
/You don't even feel ashamed,
When you needed help like noone came.
YEAAAHHhhhhh......
#No matter what happens, no matter who it is,
No matter who they are or what it is they did.
+Did you ever really care? Have you lied this whole time?
Did you ever truely mean that 3 word line?
+Why'd you do it now, and not back then?
What happened at the time that made HIM a f**king 10?
+You spent all that time, saying how you'd try.
Why even bother, continue all these lies?
+Coulda told the truth, coulda fixed the trust,
But you threw it in the rain, watched it sit and rust.
+Explain to me your thoughts, what goes through your head,
You stabbed it in the heart, felt nothing when it was dead.
(Beats fade into singing)
/I did everything I could, what I thought I should.
D*mn, I was wrong. Noww you're no good.
/You've given me a reason to try somethin' new...
But I hope you know... that won't. be. you.
//Hey, it's, YOUR mistake! Mind's not clear- and your world is fake!
//Hey! Hey! Your mistake! Never looked back, now you're startin' to flake.
(Music)
/Have you ever thought, of what was?
Have you ever thought, of what he really wants?
/You're so caught up with your new guy,
You let him get away with ev-ree lie.
/Now all's said and done, and I'm still One.
You are gone, and I'm livin' on... a brand new dawwwnnnn..........
Yes, it's cheesy, but whatever. The organization system;
/Normal singing line(s)
//chorus
#Start of rapping portion
+rapping lines
(Music/solo)Me attempting to compose music and describe it
So if you want to know what the goal was for it to sound like, my infuences that I listen to or thought fit here, these are a few different bands/artists I had in mind: Blink-182 for the punkish rock, Katy Perry, The "White kid raps fast" youtuber for the rapping, Plain white T's, and OneRepublic. Best of luck understanding that, though.
I know I need to improve a LOT, so I went to people who understand it best for some feedback. Please don't destroy me. =P