Deep Down

[Sadworld]

A poem I wrote few months back. I'm an inspiring writer and poet so criticisms are highly welcome.

A dullness deep down a grave
Their emotion comes without a taste
Broken and alone they become brave
Shades of black hiding behind a face

A dullness deep down a grave
They are captives of a life filled with test’
An escape they seek and crave
Soon they become memories laid to rest

A dullness deep down a grave
Voices screaming words of pain
Buried deeper, no chance to be save
Wounds stealing the last of their sane

A dullness deep down a grave
Stories and tales of ones ruine'
A road shattered before paved
Nightmares of their own doing

Hope you enjoy the read :)

[Spook]

This is really good. I like the rhyme scheme. :)

This is the kind of scheme I often write on.