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Spook
October 25th, 2011, 02:58 PM
Sinking deeper as I waste away
The ocean is my beast
I fall its prey

The landmarks on my arm
Are there to stay
Marking all my pain
And my dismay

You just ignore me
You know I won't change
Happy endings never start this way

So I slice away
At the peices of me you hate
I slice away
Are you happy that I'm in pain

I just made a brand new friend today
When I cry he makes me feel okay
I shake and scream and hurt I don't know why
But I smile when his glimmer catches my eye

So I slice away
At the peices of me you hate
I slice away
Are you happy that I'm in pain

I hide my face
I'm close today
You won't see me again
And I slice away

My pain.

Jupiter
October 25th, 2011, 03:40 PM
I really find this good, but.. not good. If you know what I mean?

Spook
October 26th, 2011, 08:31 AM
Yess...and it doesn't sound like me at all. :O

Genghis Khan
October 26th, 2011, 08:41 AM
I really find this good, but.. not good. If you know what I mean?

:confused:

Amaryllis
October 26th, 2011, 08:47 AM
I really find this good, but.. not good. If you know what I mean?

I find you smart but... not smart. If you know what I mean?

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Anywho, wonderful song! Hope you record it :)