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ShatteredGlass
October 24th, 2011, 06:06 PM
Why!
I cry with the tears in my eyes
A solitairy subject before me
What are you good for?!
What have you done!?
I know for sure she abhors me
You disgust me!
I hate you!
"Why won't you die!?" I ask faintly.
She looks in my eye and gives a reply in a manner most stately
Because you're too weak to fight me
I'm you and you're mine

TheGangstaSheep
October 30th, 2011, 06:25 PM
This is really powerful! The image I get from it is a schizophrenic person who feels his other side and despises it but obviously it hates itself from two sides. I'm not sure if this is right but I suppose we all percieve things differently.

ShatteredGlass
October 31st, 2011, 07:29 AM
Thank you very much :) your comment is much appreciated! And it's just a struggle with oneself under what circumstances I don't know that is certainly subjective