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Bath
October 20th, 2011, 03:09 PM
I've been browsing deviantart and found really, really beautiful poetry on there. Just wanted to share some.

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i think i wanted to die once
but that was a long time ago, now.

these days i just want to disappear.
i want to fall away into the world
to have my eyes closed, and feel like they are open

http://chokingflowers.deviantart.com/#/d3nuawu

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i am breathing underwater

limbs ache as i slowly sink

i can feel my throat tighten

everything darken

a chill in my bones

as i

whisper goodbye through

the crashing waves.

http://chokingflowers.deviantart.com/favourites/#/d2q9eh7

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can't you see
i have nothing left
for you?
i'm just cigarette ash
and tea gone cold.

i could sigh until
my ribcage aches
but you'll never care
never bleed
not at all.

i am a waste of skin.
a tragic mess.
a leech with kissing lips.
a fly encased in beeswax.
i am a ghost ship for
all your memories.

and i will never bloom.
and i will never emerge.
and i will never be anything
anything at all.

i am stripped bare.

http://chokingflowers.deviantart.com/gallery/28609216#/d3akifc

embers
October 20th, 2011, 04:08 PM
Despite the abundant 'deep meaningful teenage angst' I quite like the line 'i'm just cigarette ash // and tea gone cold'.

Reads
October 20th, 2011, 05:26 PM
That first one was really beautiful. Simple and though provoking.