words from the edge

[stenumber2]

My eyes are closed now
No words can be spoken
The waiting is over
As my body lays broken
My heart beats no more
The skin cold to touch
Now i am out of this life
I have hated so much
Dig a hole to receive me
Carve my name into stone
I am no longer there
Its just my skin
My flesh
My bone
Let me rot in the ground
Its where i want to be
Remember that guy always crying ?
That was me i was i was ste x

[XxArcAngelxX]

thats really good. i used to write songs and poems now i paint =]

[Fiction]

Mental Crisis Forum :arrow: The Open Book

Wow... Honestly I really like that. Just a word of advice, I wouldn't have read it if I hadn't have had to check it was in the right place. I wouldn't have read it due to the punctuation in it. When I see a poem or a story with no capital letters I automatically assume that it's going to be no good. If you want people to read it try capitalising, because it definatly deserves to be read :)

[Magenta]

Oh wow. Kathy hit the mark there. I actually did the same thing... I looked at the lack of spelling and punctuation and skipped right over it. Only when I noticed it had been moved and read Kathy's comment did I actually read it and I thought it was really good! So same advice applies. ^_^ Great job though.