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Wonder.
October 16th, 2011, 12:27 AM
This is a song I originally wrote a while ago. It's gone through many different phases. This phase, which I think is the final one, was written in memory of a classmate who died in a four-wheeling accident. May he rest in peace.

Possible titles: June 21, Midnight; August; Everything Must Go (I'd rather not use the last one. Any ideas?)

(The "everything must go" line was taken from the book "Feed". Not the greatest book, but I really liked that line.)

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cSFL2cmvWJA

Everything must go...

Time is not forever
Suicide and cyanide are nothing compared to death itself

Everything must go...

You loved your castle on a cloud
You loved your worlds in rabbit holes
But those were just fairytales
Ones that you never told

Everything must go...

You looked into my eyes
Told me your plans of suicide
No one expected you to die
But now it's time to say goodbye

Another death means nothing to the rest of the world
Another decayed is just the end of a season
"It's best to just forget"
And no one cares about the reason

Everything must go...
Everything must go...

Your memory will always last
I will never forget the past...

Jupiter
October 16th, 2011, 12:29 AM
That's really good......

Reads
October 16th, 2011, 11:51 PM
This is amazing. Seriously, I got the emotion from it... it made me feel so sad. Awesome writing, really.

abdheuuuchjc
October 16th, 2011, 11:56 PM
Nice lyrics but how do the instruments go?

Wonder.
October 17th, 2011, 02:21 PM
Thanks everyone. This song actually means a lot to me, even though it doesn't seem like it all that much.

Nice lyrics but how do the instruments go?
I might upload a video on youtube. I could post the chords if you wanted, but that's not gonna help much. :P

secretly_secret
October 17th, 2011, 03:02 PM
I love it. Post the youtube here if you do it.

Reads
October 17th, 2011, 04:11 PM
I love it. Post the youtube here if you do it.

I second her. I'd love to hear this.

Wonder.
October 28th, 2011, 06:58 PM
I did a video. I'll put it in the first post. It turned out terrible, but oh well. Nothing I can do about it at this current point in time.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cSFL2cmvWJA

(Can a mod move this to music? It's not so much words as it is music now with the video.)

CryWolf
November 9th, 2011, 02:07 PM
I like this man. Possible title...."Nothing Compared"

Wonder.
November 9th, 2011, 08:10 PM
I like this man. Possible title...."Nothing Compared"

I kinda like that. I also feel a little dumb for not thinking of it myself. :P

I'm gonna use that, actually.