Besides

[xWombatx]

besides im in middle school they havent really taught me anything and i really dont care for negative posts

[Whisper]

Well I have only seen you write about one particular thought... 'you hate school'
It's not the funnest place but school is a good thing and if you want to complain about something in your poetry, pick something that matters. If you didn't go to school, you wouldn't have learned how to write poetry.
I'd have to wait until you wrote more stuff to say..

I agree with Sarah so far all you've done is whine bout how much you hate school cause it actually makes you do work and you don't like that. What you haven't taken into account is you wouldn't be able to write, or read never mind know how to write poetry if you didn't go to school.

I have two sisters right, there both in diffrent universitys, I go to visit them all the time and katie took me to the cave (study hall) when I was with her. She had an exam and she wanted me to meet her friends, we had a great time and you know what they were studying for plant tax and they were going over allot of stuff that I had learned in biology, they were quizing each other and I kept blurting out the answers.

[xWombatx]

Well good for you guys
Anyways heres my latest one
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All my love and all my hate
Will never end my inevitable fate
I sit amd wait
The clock ticking my life away
I really wish I could stay
I really wish there was a way
But there isnt one
So I try to have some fun
Living every moment as if it was my last
Trying to forget my broekn past
All I know is that life is a series of moments
But these moments are only temporary
I live my life in disregard
Knowing god will throw me the last card
At any moment he will
And at the moment time will stand still