I hate myself.

[Mannequin]

Drawing narrow lines down my spine
Demented thoughts fill my mind.
I hate who I have become
and I realize nothing can be undone.
I pierce my flesh and speak sin
I'm only doing things, I will once do again.
Only am I to rot in this distortion of bone and flesh
Oh, the ugly me draws communication to a rest.
Crying in a room of shallow bliss,
Skanks, hoes, and jock-ness.
I feel i've reached a climax of reality
Nothing is nothing and the product is me.

I hate myself.

this poem sucks and I don't give a shit.

[schrei jess]

It doesnt suck, it's quite good, but confusing. Confusing does not equal suckiness. Suckiness isnt a word, though, oh well.

[Mannequin]

It doesnt suck, it's quite good, but confusing. Confusing does not equal suckiness. Suckiness isnt a word, though, oh well.

It's just my attempt to be intelligent, which im not.

[grimlip]

I hate you too
You have no clue
You can't write
Try as you might
Your f*cking lame
It's quite a shame
Poems shouldn't rhyme
It's a waste of time
Your a f*cking tool
Trying to be cool
Go cut yourself and cry in the dark
Cause your so called talent has missed the mark

[schrei jess]

I hate you too
You have no clue
You can't write
Try as you might
Your f*cking lame
It's quite a shame
Poems shouldn't rhyme
It's a waste of time
Your a f*cking tool
Trying to be cool
Go cut yourself and cry in the dark
Cause your so called talent has missed the mark

That was NOT nice...

[Sage]

Sorry grimlip but that was pretty mediocre too.