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Jupiter
October 9th, 2011, 02:36 PM
I know I ought not to
But I don’t know why
It’s easy for the outsider to look
And say, he not worth your time
Not ever any day
But inside me something feels something more
As if I yearn to learn
Just what goes on
In the head and the heart
Of the one I so long
And now all I can say is
Bon Voyage to the life I once lived
I cannot look back
I cannot look down
For I know that inside
If I do, I will drown

Bath
October 9th, 2011, 02:50 PM
That's actually not bad, but the title irks me, haha.

Until is spelled wrong, and how can you catch someone who's not falling? :P

Jupiter
October 9th, 2011, 03:06 PM
:) Its actually not mine, but a friends.

CryWolf
October 10th, 2011, 03:52 PM
I like this. And I'm a sucker for weird titles :)

Reads
October 13th, 2011, 12:55 PM
This is really good :o

Good job to your friend.