Drowning

[Bath]

Anchors surround me
and I breathe quietly.
At the bottom of the sea,
could you lie here with me?

The ocean looks lovely
from down here, you see.
I’m drunk from tasting death,
could you lie here with me?

My blood mixes with salt,
I can’t let myself free.
Blurry creatures kiss me goodnight,
why aren’t you here with me?

[Jupiter]

I really like this...

[briannafrmhell]

Sounds like the end of Titanic

[Jupiter]

I agree...

[Bath]

I really like this...

Thank you, Eric.

Sounds like the end of Titanic

Re-reading it, I can see what you mean, haha.

[CryWolf]

Yeah this has good imagery. I like it!

[briannafrmhell]

Good poem, bad movie lol

[Bath]

I wasn't even thinking of Titanic when I wrote it asdfghhjkl

[briannafrmhell]

I know :)

[Reads]

Great writing :) I like it, a lot.