Empty

[Fiction]

Empty

Drowning in imperfection,
Suffocating in self-hate.
Her image staring back at her.
Each rib outlined with paper white skin,
her collar bones like those of a victim.
A victim not of drought, of famine, of war
but a victim of herself.
Her mind's whispering voices,
changing the colour in her eyes.
A deep golden brown,
to empty,
to nothing.

[Kaius]

its pretty, Kathy. Its so descriptive :) Well done

[Fiction]

its pretty, Kathy. Its so descriptive :) Well done

Thank you :) x

[SosbanFach]

That is very deep, and very touching. I don't regularly comment on works here, but this is so good that I had to. Thank you.

[Fiction]

That is very deep, and very touching. I don't regularly comment on works here, but this is so good that I had to. Thank you.

Thank you, that means a lot :)

[CryWolf]

I really like this a lot! "her collar bones like those of a victim" is a seriously cool, and descriptive line. Nice imagery. :)

[Fiction]

I really like this a lot! "her collar bones like those of a victim" is a seriously cool, and descriptive line. Nice imagery. :)

Thank youuu :)

[Love.Hate]

This is really deep. Well done kathy i really like it :D

your descriptions are excellent!

[Fiction]

Thanks Fran :)