HandheldOutlaw
September 21st, 2011, 08:03 PM
Jaded
Breaking
Crumbling til I'm nothing
The pressure's closing in on all sides
and it's crushing me
Perfect.
Perfect.
Perfect.
Perfect.
Perfect.
Imperfect.
It's not enough.
New.
Different.
Amazing.
They'll all finally notice
But year after year it's all the same.
Fat.
Ugly.
Unfashionable.
Weird.
Too quiet.
Dumb.
Know-it-all.
To one final breaking point.
Crumbling.
Breaking.
Jaded.
The first I've written in a while, so rather rusty. Opinions?
Breaking
Crumbling til I'm nothing
The pressure's closing in on all sides
and it's crushing me
Perfect.
Perfect.
Perfect.
Perfect.
Perfect.
Imperfect.
It's not enough.
New.
Different.
Amazing.
They'll all finally notice
But year after year it's all the same.
Fat.
Ugly.
Unfashionable.
Weird.
Too quiet.
Dumb.
Know-it-all.
To one final breaking point.
Crumbling.
Breaking.
Jaded.
The first I've written in a while, so rather rusty. Opinions?