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HandheldOutlaw
September 21st, 2011, 08:03 PM
Jaded

Breaking

Crumbling til I'm nothing

The pressure's closing in on all sides

and it's crushing me

Perfect.

Perfect.

Perfect.

Perfect.

Perfect.

Imperfect.

It's not enough.

New.

Different.

Amazing.

They'll all finally notice

But year after year it's all the same.

Fat.

Ugly.

Unfashionable.

Weird.

Too quiet.

Dumb.

Know-it-all.

To one final breaking point.

Crumbling.

Breaking.

Jaded.

The first I've written in a while, so rather rusty. Opinions?

CryWolf
September 22nd, 2011, 03:02 PM
I like this :)