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Mannequin
April 5th, 2007, 09:51 PM
When we run from ourselves
we become someone else.
Tearing apart our insides--
molding us into a new design.
Time runs away
our mind dies in dominant decay.
We know its happening everyday
shrinking and stretching every which way.
Now we've become so tangled in lies
our core disperses and dries.
To be a part of the new trend
is only killing the human within.


Heh.

MoveAlong
April 5th, 2007, 11:02 PM
Catchy.

Mannequin
April 8th, 2007, 06:39 PM
Thanks.

Bobby
April 13th, 2007, 01:45 PM
Hm I like your focus on the subject, you stay on course. But I feel that some of the rhyming felt forced.

Whisper
April 13th, 2007, 04:26 PM
Wow...moving as always austin