Jimmy Page
September 7th, 2011, 11:27 AM
Here is three texts(don't know what else to call them) i wrote yesterday.tell me what you think,i would appreciate it if you guys had any tips for me.
Gone:
What is this pain deep inside?
No open wounds can be seen
Only scars,scars in body and mind
End it all,a bang and you are gone
Slowly killing yourself
Both in body and soul
The razor is your doom
End it all,a cut and you are gone
HATE,DEATH and SUFFERING
These are the words you carved in
These are the words that is killing you
End it all,a leap and your gone
Court of the free:
Never again will I see your smile
Never again will I see you walk in the door
Never again will I hug you
If i could turn back
Just for a second
To see your smile
To see you azure eyes
Never again will I hear your voice
Never again will I hear your fingers play the strings
Because your string got tuned to high,and snapped
If i could find a way to see you again,I would
But wait,there is a way
My string must be tuned as well
I will do it,to see you smile again
If only I had helped you more
If only I had held you close and told you it would go away
But i didn't,and now you are gone
I have found a way to see you again
And this way I will use
I will paint myself black and join you
Join you in the court of the damned
The court of the broken
The court of the free
Heartbroken:
My heart is broken
My body is hollow
Because you left me
And shattered my heart
I'm feeling numb
My feelings are painted black
Because you are never coming back
But my hate is not for you
My hate is a razor
And that razor is cutting me
Watching my blood flowing
Flowing away with my life
Finally I am happy
Finally I will see your smile again
Sorry that its so long,but thank you for reading it :)
Gone:
What is this pain deep inside?
No open wounds can be seen
Only scars,scars in body and mind
End it all,a bang and you are gone
Slowly killing yourself
Both in body and soul
The razor is your doom
End it all,a cut and you are gone
HATE,DEATH and SUFFERING
These are the words you carved in
These are the words that is killing you
End it all,a leap and your gone
Court of the free:
Never again will I see your smile
Never again will I see you walk in the door
Never again will I hug you
If i could turn back
Just for a second
To see your smile
To see you azure eyes
Never again will I hear your voice
Never again will I hear your fingers play the strings
Because your string got tuned to high,and snapped
If i could find a way to see you again,I would
But wait,there is a way
My string must be tuned as well
I will do it,to see you smile again
If only I had helped you more
If only I had held you close and told you it would go away
But i didn't,and now you are gone
I have found a way to see you again
And this way I will use
I will paint myself black and join you
Join you in the court of the damned
The court of the broken
The court of the free
Heartbroken:
My heart is broken
My body is hollow
Because you left me
And shattered my heart
I'm feeling numb
My feelings are painted black
Because you are never coming back
But my hate is not for you
My hate is a razor
And that razor is cutting me
Watching my blood flowing
Flowing away with my life
Finally I am happy
Finally I will see your smile again
Sorry that its so long,but thank you for reading it :)