I was told

[Scarface]

I was told to put faith in god
I was told to smoke
I was told to cut

But when I look into your eyes
Truth be told it lead to my demise
I've cut off all my ties with them
I've scraped my face off with a rusty spatula
I told you I'd come after you

Ransacked house with the paper on the desk
read it, sit down and cry about it
I nailed my eyes to the cross of fate
There is no escape

Swallow the pill that burns your tongue
I'm hung by the ropes of your noose of words
I remember where it all started but not where it finished
The blood is on your hands, as my vision diminished

I was told to listen but I didn't
I was told to have faith and I did
But wasn't told by you....

[Angel Androgynous]

I like the rhythm and the poem is very deep. Keep it up, Ronnie. c:

[Amaryllis]

You're a really good writer. I love the symbolism, the emotions it portrays. You should post up more poems. And love the use of Faith.