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deadpie
September 5th, 2011, 03:28 AM
You won't make this easy on me
Quiet breaths and long weeps
Undress your gown and machinery
Close your eyes and speak to me
But you don't fucking say anything
I will skate down the block tonight
And try not to be self aware
Because I know the time is now
And I should be smothering you

When you're dead and rotting
It'll be easier for everyone to move on
Because you were just a vegetable anyways
We can pray and have an eulogy
A sad funeral where we say sad things
Then it's off to Disneyland
Like a holocaust memorial on HGTV
Isn't that fucking funny?

You as in no one
As in a big blank nothing
Synonyms being shit and useless
Common meaning: scraps of garbage, nonentity.

Amaryllis
September 5th, 2011, 05:33 AM
Do you rap? Cause you'd be very good at it.

Anyway, love the poem. It's very original. Especially the last line. You should rap since you're such a music lover. According to your signature. Or someone might just steal it and turn it into a song... No, of course I wouldn't do that.

Love.Hate
September 5th, 2011, 12:53 PM
Your actually a really talented writer, I love reading your stuff it's really deep. This is very good :)

Angel Androgynous
September 5th, 2011, 12:58 PM
I really like the rhythm and the emotion conveyed. It's quite unique. ^_^ Keep up the poetry.