I don't know

[Amaryllis]

I DON'T KNOW

I don't know when the dam broke
When the knife was no longer
Enough

I don't know when I chose to starve
When Ana became
Me

I don't know when it all fell apart
When the little remains left washed away
Gone

I don't know when it became an addiction
A beautiful, euphoric
Pain

Now, I'll put back the pieces
And this time it will
Stay

[OptimusPrime]

Another nice piece of work. If I had to pick you or a professional poem/artist you would win hands down. Your work is just so amazing. It's perfect in every single way possible.

[Amaryllis]

Thanks so much, aaron :) Personally, I don't like this one much. I've written better, I think. But sometimes it's just nice to write what you feel without thinking too much

[fenrirdies]

I like this one kinda goes with how I'm feeling

[OptimusPrime]

Thanks so much, aaron :) Personally, I don't like this one much. I've written better, I think. But sometimes it's just nice to write what you feel without thinking too much
For me it is not the quality of the words, or even how many. It's the fact it's such a sweet poem and many relate to it.

[Amaryllis]

I think a lot of people relate to my poems because it's a common occurance. Thanks so much guys :) It's great to have support and people looking at and reading the things I put up