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Magenta
September 4th, 2011, 01:12 AM
My heart beats faster,
my vision is blurred.
I'm soaked in sweat
and I can no longer endure.

My thoughts are racing
so much I cannot hold on.
My hands are quivering
and I will never be strong.

My breath is shaky
and my resolve unsure.
Any thought of recovery
seems uncertain, obscure.

This night is like others,
filled with fighting and strife.
All I ever wanted was just
to get on with my life

Love.Hate
September 4th, 2011, 11:55 AM
I like this :) well done jo this is a very real poem.

Magenta
September 4th, 2011, 12:37 PM
Thanks Fran.

I'm hoping it sounds real since it's based off of real experiences. :P

Love.Hate
September 4th, 2011, 01:27 PM
It does sound real, it's a poem I can really relate too which is why I like it so much :)