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Amaryllis
August 31st, 2011, 10:23 AM
DROWNING

Drowning
A deep
Endless
Blue

A pain
So deep
No cut
Can match

Swimming
Up
Or maybe
Down

A dark
So dark
No light
Exists

A winter
So cold
In a sinking
World

Loneliness
Beyond
Empty
Space

Suffocating
In a hell
So bare
Of life

It's getting
Harder
And harder
To breathe.

fenrirdies
August 31st, 2011, 08:34 PM
Z I'm starting to look forward to reading your poems

Amaryllis
September 1st, 2011, 06:08 AM
Thank you so much, Jamani. You've been so nice. I'm really glad you enjoy my poems