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Magenta
August 27th, 2011, 06:11 PM
Thoughts of the Monster.

Every night little whispers fill my ears,
endlessly reciting all of my sorrows and fears.
"Monster, liar, so guilty and afraid.
None of your pain ever shall fade."

I cover my ears, I shake and quake.
Such a tortured mind do these thoughts make.
"Pathetic, worthless, stubborn and cruel.
Never had a friend and why would you?"

I try to stay calm and keep myself silent,
only to be wracked by sobs so violent.
"Monster, liar, so guilty and afraid.
Why would your pain ever begin to fade?"

CryWolf
August 29th, 2011, 11:31 PM
I like this :)

Amaryllis
August 31st, 2011, 10:58 AM
Beautiful, Jo. Beautiful. It speaks to me on a personal level.

Black Eight
August 31st, 2011, 09:24 PM
I like this very much.

OptimusPrime
August 31st, 2011, 09:27 PM
Really decent poem. One of the best I've seen in ages. Good work!

Magenta
September 1st, 2011, 10:10 PM
Thanks all.

@Z, wow. That's actually a compliment to like... a extreme level if someone actually relates to it. No one's said that about my work before really...

Amaryllis
September 2nd, 2011, 05:53 AM
Really, Jo? o.O I can relate to a LOT of the things you do haha. Your photography, poetry, posts, everything really xD