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[Scarface]

I saw through the pain you caused
it must be something about your stupid little flaws
it's like your nails going down my back like claws

I feel like you just rubbed my face across wet exposed wires
my feelings for you deflated like a flat tire
I hate being the scapegoat for all your misery

I know you hate me, just come out and face me
I'll make you taste the lining of your stomach
just like my mind just plummeted

Your scum after all these years
You used to be my number one fear
Now I want to shear your face like the wool off a sheep
I'll make you taste the ultimate sleep

My anger only grows but I'll never let it show
Because when you fade out I'll be taking the blues
No more excuses, it's not like I ain't been through this
I saw through the pain you caused
The most I've ever saw

Now when I'm taking that final leap
it's looking very steep
I saw through the pain you caused
LOOK OUT BELOW

[Magenta]

I like this, Ronnie. I'm usually obsessive over poetry format 'cause I'm odd like that but I like how this didn't really have any definite one. :)

[Dimitri]

I thought it really painted a picture

[Love.Hate]

I really like this :)

[Amaryllis]

You have talent. I love the imagery and the strong emotion it conveys. It's really refreshing compared to all my structured poems. You should write more.

[Upintheair]

This is really great. Its extremely visual, and I could feel the emotion you put into it. It is a really good poem, and Im thoroughly impressed! You have alot of talent

[SimplyTom]

This is great Ronnie

[CryWolf]

Nice man.