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Amaryllis
August 20th, 2011, 10:48 AM
2nd Little Girl poem. He's the first: http://www.virtualteen.org/forums/showthread.php?t=108968

LITTLE GIRL 2

A little girl lies in bed
A bleeding in her head
The tears are running down her face
Her eyes are wide and red

A little girl pretends to sleep
His voice a dark caress
His hands are running over her
Her mind a shattered mess

A little girl fakes a smile
A scolding in her mind
She nods and laughs and says "I'm fine"
While blades are drawing lines

A little girl runs up the steps
"You fat pig" is all she hears
She steps on the scale and starts to cry
She wants to disappear

A little girl sits in a chair
A woman starts to speak
"Why are you here?" she asks
"Because I'm just too weak."

Valkyrie
August 20th, 2011, 12:50 PM
Wow ur also good at poetry, Im totally crap at poetry but Im trying to write a mini story (Started yesterday), Im hoping that will succed eventually...

Iris
August 20th, 2011, 08:03 PM
heartbreaking...

Amaryllis
August 21st, 2011, 02:12 AM
@Jess
Thanks :) And I'm sure you're just as good if not better!

@Lilys
I think I should say thank you but thanks. For taking the time to read it. It means so much to me when people do.