Dying Cold(lyrics)

[Jimmy Page]

I have been working on a song lately,im finally done with the lyrics,u guys tell me what u think,and if u have any suggestions to make the lyrics better or and idea to a melody or riff give me a pm :D


Darkness running through my vains
Darkness killing evry thing
Feeling good in all the pain
Poison running through my brain

He is all that's in my head
The lies and poison soon will spread
Here to steal my very soul
Everything is turning cold

My eyes are blinded i cant see
Your presence killing all the trees
My heart no longer sets me free
Your words are slowly poisoning me

Close your ears to poisoning lies
Soon youl feel his chilling cold
He crushes dream like you crush snow
Please run from the chilling glow

Please don't think you know what your doing
Don't tell me what i say is a lie
If you do youl end up as the loser
When hes done with you youl feel all alone

Your world is full off trees and flowers
My world is full off frozen hours
Laying dying in the snow
You better run cause here he comes

[ADC12]

hey nice lyrics man :) i think its gd as it is.

so your gunna play it on guitar?
can you read music? because if you can i can help you with melody.. ive got a tune in mind for some of the verses :)

[Jimmy Page]

Tnx,im was thinking of guitar or piano,but mainly guitar,i can read tablature but not notes lol

[ADC12]

damn! if i sort of sent you notes (eg A,B,C,D etc..) can you play that way? lol

[Jimmy Page]

Yeah

[ADC12]

ill probably have the whole thing done by tomorow :) lool

[Jimmy Page]

Ok :)

[ADC12]

C -C C -D Eb D C
Dark-ness run-ning through my vains
Eb -Eb Eb -F G - F Eb
Dark-ness kill-ing ev-ry thing
D -D D Eb F Eb D
Fee-ling good in all the pain
F -Eb C -Bb G Bb C
Poi-son run-ning through my brain

C C C D Eb D C
He is all that's in my head
Eb Eb Eb Eb-F G F Eb
The lies and poi-son soon will spread
D D D Eb F -Eb D
Here to steal my ve-ry soul
F -Eb-C Bb G -Bb C
Eve-ry-thing is turn-ing cold

C Ab Ab G -F F E F
My eyes are blind-ed, i cant see
C Ab -Ab G - F Ab F Ab Bb
Your pre-sence kill-ing all of the trees
Bb C C Bb -G Ab-G F G
My heart no lon-ger se-ts me free
G G F Eb -C Bb-G -Bb C
Your words are slow-ly poi-son-ing me

C C C D Eb -D C
Close your ears to poison-ing lies
Eb Eb Eb F G -F Eb
Soon youl feel his chil-ling cold
D D -D D Eb F Eb D
He crush-es dream like you crush snow
F Eb C Bb G -Bb C
Please run from the chill-ing glow

C Ab Ab G F F E E E -E
Please don't think you know what you are doi-ng
C Ab Ab G F Ab F Ab Bb
Don't tell me what i say is a lie
Bb Bb C C Bb G Ab G F -G
If you do youl end up as the los-er
G G F Eb C Bb G Bb- C
When hes done with you youl feel a - lone

C C C C D Eb D C
Your world is full off trees and flowerS
Eb Eb Eb Eb F G -F Eb
My world is full off froz-en hours
D -D D -Eb F Eb D
Lay-ing dy-ing in the snow
F Eb C Bb G Bb C
You better run cause here he comes


a bit rough though... if you want the chords or rhythms pls ask :) lol