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xWombatx
May 20th, 2005, 08:12 AM
School is so lame
Every day is the same
Do this do that
Id rather eat a rat
We sit here everyday
Wasting are lives away

Anonymous
May 20th, 2005, 03:09 PM
i agree i hate school. the poem was OKAY???

Anonymous
May 20th, 2005, 11:45 PM
That was pretty good, but for a comedy poem, it could have been funnier.

DouggyO.o
May 21st, 2005, 11:41 AM
that was kinda cool

letsMASTURBATtogether
May 21st, 2005, 02:53 PM
We can’t stop thinking about the pain you brought on to us
How I despise you and your malicious ways to torture us
You hurt us and destroyed us by the impact’s of your hand
We can’t be near you we have banned you from are life so please just get of are land
We hate you we hope you rout in hell cuz of your stupidity
You internally scared us w/ all the brutality
Why did you hurt us what did we do to make you go so mad
We were always been nice to you & then everything went bad
We will never forgive you for the shit you put us through we did nothing to ever make you mad
You destroyed my family that was surviving on are own living life part by part
We were always safe & dry until you came to tear are hearts apart
The time has come for you to go now take the strange dark road ahead we refuse to take anymore
Go go get away we don’t want you here no more so live your life all by yourself cuz your not
Welcome anymore
Don’t you dare come back knocking on are door

DouggyO.o
May 21st, 2005, 02:58 PM
omg that was awesome

xWombatx
May 26th, 2005, 10:20 AM
I rewrote that one
I hate this school
I hate the people who think its cool
Who cares what the square root of pi is
Why do you tell us what the meaning of life is?
We sit here 6 hours a day
They dont care what we have to say
They just want to get paid
While all the students are worrying about getting laid
Im sick of it all
I was sick of it the day i learned to crawl

xWombatx
May 26th, 2005, 10:28 AM
You try and hold us back
Knowing some day we might attack
You live your lives in fear
Knowing the day of reckoning is near
We will rise
To all these damn lies
Now all you people who want to fight
For what you know in your head to be right
Stand up and fight the power
And watch as your enemies cower

All you people who are sick of these lies
All of you, ALL OF YOU PLEASE RISE
We will take this damn enterprise
It doesnt matter what the size
Or how many tries
All that matters is that we take it
It just takes a little bit of wit
And maybe a few other people
Compared to us they are feeble

Whisper
May 26th, 2005, 10:35 AM
OMG your such a cry baby :roll:
buck up
You need a high school diploma to pick up other people garbage for a living.
With out your diploma er GED you....are.....SCREWED!
So shut up, do your school, get good grades, graduate, go to university (they are SOOOO MUCH FUN)

xWombatx
May 26th, 2005, 11:33 PM
sit on my ass

BelieveInYesterday
May 29th, 2005, 12:58 AM
Someday you will find me,
Dead, alone, lying in a puddle of crimson red,
The one thing which kept me alive and put me to rest,
You will find a note upon my chest
A note, which will kill me once, but will kill others time and time again
Here is that note
A note which brings the worst of news
The same note, which lies upon my chest, is the same note, which will kill me just that once
I leave you with this… the meaning of life
The meaning of life is this, one thing…
I lost that one thing, that one thing, my friend… is happiness.

-Let me know what you think

BelieveInYesterday
May 29th, 2005, 12:58 AM
I can’t explain why I feel this way
It’s just a feeling that must go away,
I have never felt this cold, lost, and alone
I tried to get rid of it but it’s carved into my bone,
You told me to smile and hold my head high
Bury the feelings that tear me up inside,
You said I wanted attention,
You could never understand,
Spend one day in my shoes
And we’ll just see how bad you lose,
Watch myself die, as I look you in the eye
All just before you say “Good bye”,
***
The things that made you happy are now making you sad
You’re trapped in the depression of your own made-up land,
You closed your eyes tight,
The nightmare lives on,
You tried to scream, but no sound came out,
The more you cut the less you felt,
The more you cut the better you felt
***
I’d like to think tomorrow,
Will be a better day,
Some how this must go away… but I’m afraid it’s here to stay
I just want the pain
To end…

-Let me know what you think about this one too...
IM me on MyCruelestDream

xWombatx
May 31st, 2005, 08:55 PM
Wow you people dont live in america...I have to go to school, I do go to school i get good grades but does that mean im not able to hate it? I thought i had a right to my own opinion...The fact of the matter is you people obviously don't like others opinions, and just like to find everything negative about everything, so i say to you people Bite me and have a great life have many children make 80,000 a year and shut the hell up

xWombatx
May 31st, 2005, 08:56 PM
And whats up with the people writing their poems on my thread? cant they make their own? I mean i dont really care but cmon