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Magenta
August 10th, 2011, 08:45 PM
Inside the skin is no girl
but a skeleton of lies.
As her addiction unfurls,
her body dies.

Warped is her mind
as she looks but cannot see.
She continues to try and find
something she will never be.

She's stuck in this pain
but still tries to deduct.
She only realizes it was in vain
as her life ends, abrupt.

Amaryllis
August 11th, 2011, 08:53 AM
It's beautiful. I love it. Once of the most uh... What's that word... Well, it really reaches out to me. Love it, Jo. Keep writing. You're amazing

Tiggz
August 11th, 2011, 06:02 PM
wow all i can say is wow itz amazing wow