I'm Beautiful

[Amaryllis]

First happy poem I've ever written :)

I'M BEAUTIFUL

Sometimes I feel ugly
Sometimes I feel fat
Sometimes I look silly
Sometimes I look bad

Sometimes I will stumble
Sometimes I will fall
Sometimes I will crumble
But sometimes I stand tall

But I know that deep inside
I'm as beautiful as can be
I'm as pretty as a flower
As amazing as the sea

I think my smile is warm
And my heart is made of gold
I know that my laugh travels
And my kindness overflows

I know that I'm not bad
I'm not that bad at all
I'm better than I feel
I'll get up when I fall

My voice is made of love
My hugs come from my soul
My words are made of hearts
And my warmth fills all the holes

So I'll look into the mirror
And accept the girl I see
I'll give life a chance today
And whatever is, will be

[afronteboi]

Beautiful!

[Angel Androgynous]

Wow! Very gorgeous poem! :D I love it!

[Amaryllis]

@Nic(if I may call you that)
Thank you :) It really means a lot to know people read my poems

@Ida(Btw your name sounds like Ida B! The book)
Thank you! You're an amazing writer too!

[SosbanFach]

Sometimes I feel ugly
Sometimes I feel fat
Sometimes I look silly
Sometimes I look bad

Sometimes I will stumble
Sometimes I will fall
Sometimes I will crumble
But sometimes I stand tall

[-]But[/-] I know that deep inside
I'm as beautiful as can be
I'm as pretty as a flower
As amazing as the sea

I think my smile is warm
And my heart is made of gold
I know that my laugh travels
And my kindness overflows

I know that I'm not bad
I'm not that bad at all
I'm better than I feel
I'll get up when I fall

My voice is made of love
My hugs come from my soul
My words are made of hearts
And my warmth fills all the holes

So I'll look into the mirror
And accept the girl I see
I'll give life a chance today
And whatever is, will be

Love it. I've suggested a couple of changes, for you to incorporate or ignore as you please. My changes are in bold, or struck out. Please don't feel obliged to do anything to it though.

[Amaryllis]

Hey it sounds better! :D Thanks so much cymrulengthyirish..something... Anyway, thanks! I like it, gonna change it. Could you see if the poem i finished a while ago needs changing too please? It's called Look Into The Mirror.

Thanks irish guy :) You've just landed yourself a job! My official poem-editor xD Congratulations! <3

[SosbanFach]

Irish? How dare you! :P

Glad you like the changes :)

[Amaryllis]

You're not irish? Then what are you? Scottish? O.O Ooohhh I love the skirts. And I edited it! Thanks for the help!

[SosbanFach]

Noooo! Not Scottish either!

Cymru a Lloegr
Wales and England

:P