Vulerability

[IanMilo]

This is my attempt at a vulnerability shoot... I actually took the time to stand in rain until I was drenched for it.

Obviously I didn't care about the background to much... This is a practice shoot before I do the real thing

Any advice or encouragement would be much appreciated! The whole theme is that even though I have been hurt so much, by so many people and I feel vulnerable I can still be angry and strong. (Angry and strong comes later) so I just wanted to see if my vulnerable passes off well enough or if I should do something other?

Any background ideas would be great too!

[flumeendeavors]

I would say that you could do better. I think you took the concept to an extreme. I think you were too litteral with the concept.

[Love.Hate]

Honestly i dont like the 2nd picture at all.. the others are okay.. just they show different emotions to the "vunerabilty" you desired.
You look more scared than vunerable.

This emotion is a hard one to convey.. you have to be closed off from the world.. The first picture shows this, you can tell your vunerable here.

I would work on different postures :)

[RoseyCadaver]

Like Fran said,you looked a little more scared then Vulnerable.Vulnerable doesn't mean you're sad or scared,it means you're an easy target,I would say maybe take the photos a little higher pointing down on you to make you look smaller.That is just what I think.

[LivierGleek]

I think that you could work on facial expressions, coz you looked sad :/
And have some clothes on next time :D