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Twistember
July 23rd, 2011, 12:32 AM
RED

I was mad
my face went pure white
I paced the kitchen for an hour
staring ar the drawer
with all the sharp ones in it
then I opened it, and grabbed one

Then I saw red
I saw red (x2)
with the red came relief
I saw red (x3)

Sticks and stones
will never break my bones
and the words you say will always hurt me
I hear the words you say

And I see red
I see red (x2)
with the red came relief
I see red (x3)

Then one day
I saw red
and the red was not enough
no, the red was not enough
(repeat)

I see red (x3)
with the red came no relief
I still see red (x3)

And still no relief

Lolli
June 24th, 2012, 02:29 PM
Like it

Breakeven
June 24th, 2012, 02:37 PM
i like it , ur good :D

Commander Thor
July 1st, 2012, 01:12 PM
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Please don't bump old threads.
This one is from almost a year ago.

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