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deadpie
July 21st, 2011, 04:56 PM
Here is the first part of the story I was working on a while ago, along with the new chapter I finished today. I took a very long break from working on it, but now I'm interested in getting back into the story. About a week ago I read through the chapters, edited up some things and added the new chapter. I hope anyone that reads enjoys.

The story does contain extreme violence, mentioning of rape, torture, and language that might offend your teenage brain. I warn you, this story is not happy in any sort of way and will probably bother most of you on many levels.

So here it is, seventy one fucking pages in all. Also, don't fucking complain that I didn't double space like I did with the previous chapters because there's no fucking way I'm going to spend an hour double spacing every single little paragraph.


Bam (http://laststep1.tumblr.com/)

Magus
July 22nd, 2011, 12:20 AM
:3 wut?

Angel Androgynous
July 22nd, 2011, 08:10 AM
I like it so far! I also love how each chapter/section is from a different character's point of view. (:
Also, the descriptions, though brief, still bring a picture to the mind so that the reader can visualize what is going on. The different points of view also help see the story through different lenses. ^_^ I like the character Cody, he seems to know what he wants and what he's doing. (: