Tell me what you think please

[iLove2Write]

Im writing a blog that I hope to turn in to a book. But i need more feedback so can you guys tell me what you think and what i can add to make it appeal to everybody male and female. Be honest because I really want to become a writer and I want it to be good and interesting.

This is the blog.
http://tetesotherworld.blogspot.com/

[IanMilo]

If you want a book out of something, it isn't advisable to post it on the web, because someone could always come around seeing it and stealing it to make their own. But for anything that is written, there IS an audience for it, it's a matter of finding the right audience.