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Amaryllis
July 21st, 2011, 06:44 AM
Girl In The Mirror

There's a fist within my heart
A rope around my neck
A pounding in my gut
A demon in my head

I hate the freak I see
The ugliest in the world
I want to dig her eyes out
She makes me want to hurl

She makes me want to scream
She's bigger than a tree
She's shorter than a midget
I wouldn't want her for free

She's bigger than a mama joke
She's bigger than a lake
She shakes the ground she stands on
She wastes the space she takes

Her sunken eyes are dead
Her lips a bitter shade
Her nose a crooked monstrosity
She's someone I would hate

I want to make her bleed
Her being disappear
I want to kill her bad
I don't want to be her

bambino
July 24th, 2011, 12:24 PM
I love the line 'she wastes the space she takes'

xdancing_for_rainx
July 25th, 2011, 02:04 AM
A bit sad, but quite nice :) Definitely a poem I can relate to.
Btw- you're so much lovelier than that girl in the mirror :)

AltoVaughn
July 25th, 2011, 02:55 AM
It expresses something I think everyone goes through. I like it. Even the most confident people (Of which I'm far from) hate something about themselves. Some of us more than others.

Amaryllis
July 27th, 2011, 07:55 AM
@Cat,
That's my favourite line too haha.

@Bri,
Thank you. I really do hope so. But I think what makes me beautiful isn't my face. But that's okay.

@Ben,
True. :) We all feel insecure sometimes. I'mperfect ;)