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Caene
July 19th, 2011, 10:58 PM
He whispered in my ear
So only I could hear
Come with me child
Pain is only mild

I know a place
Outside His grace
You can see
How this world was meant to be

I need your soul
My only goal
He pulled a knife
But did not take my life

Come along
Here you can belong
This place is grand
Just take my hand

Don't forget to close the door
You might fall through the floor
If you do, don't ring the bell
Just remember, your in hell

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What are your thoughts? Any good?

Angel Androgynous
July 20th, 2011, 12:55 AM
I love it! I can picture everything! Keep it up. (: