new drawing

[Travis Is Losing It]

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[Voldemort]

Whoa thats gud!!! but i think the wings r too low n adding some value on her body will make this better. im also an artist so i draw alot, i can show it 2 u sometyms.

[User Deleted]

Pretty good :)

Only problems I see are:
Wings too low
Leg too far back, other too far forward
Arm to belly ratio :P

[Angel Androgynous]

Maybe the low wings are your style, I don't know xD but they are pretty low. I like it (: Maybe try to make the arms a little too thick, otherwise, your style is great!

[Weeping]

The head seems pretty small compared to the body, the arm/shoulder should be higher, connected to the line over, since I bet the back aren't supposed to wierdly stick up like that? Probably the arms should also be a bit thicker, and the elbows should be fixed a bit.

Also, for the legs, the line between her hip and "between-the-legs" shouldn't be so visible, more like.. shadow-ish? And the "back" leg would probably look better/more natural if it was more like.. straight down? And not so far back (even though most of it'd probably disappear behind the other leg).


And well, the wings are really low if you compare it to most stuff, but I actually like that.


Lol, don't take this as if I think this drawing sucks or anything, which it probably sounds like, but I actually like it quite a lot, it's pretty.. :3

:hug:

[Travis Is Losing It]

Wow guys thank you and yes i did mean to put the wings that low. i had alot of issues drawing this with the head and the angle of her looking. the head i just through together cause i suck with heads. thank you all for giving tips :P

[Jennifer's Ashes]

I don't know whether you're still accepting comments, but I didn't see this thread before.

I love the concept of it, really cool. But...
The wings are purely down to style, though I would position them a little higher.
Your arm to body ratio is really off, and also the shoulders are positioned far too far forward. Overall, try and work on your positions. Thats a kind of complex pose, so maybe you should perfect the basic human figure before trying this stuff. A lot of us aren't there yet, but you should try and develope a real eye for proportions.

Good luck!

[Angel Androgynous]

Hey, I really like the concept of this drawing. Can I draw a version of it? I'll give you credit. ^_^ If you say no, that's okay too. (:

[Travis Is Losing It]

lol go ahead angel :P as long as u post it up here :D and yah i know im bad at porpotioning the body :/ it was a good attempt though

[Angel Androgynous]

It was an attempt but practice makes perfect! Of course I'll post it up here! (I love how you made the wings low and the whole concept is really pretty to me) I bet with time you'll get better and better ^_^

[FearsomeEnder]

I like it you might want to add more shading though

[Travis Is Losing It]

thx gamer. I actually dont revisit my drawings once i write the ending date its not another pencil mark. its an ocd issue of mine lol. I dont re-do drawings either. I just make a new drawing and try to improve on what i see and figure out

[Awesome]

Awesooome. Like me :D

[Travis Is Losing It]

lol thank you austin