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LifeisLife
July 8th, 2011, 02:27 PM
My mistakes

At first we were strangers to one another,
Now we dont even bother.
It all happened so fast,
I want to go back to the past.

After it all ended,
My happiness descended.
Everything we had,
Just dissapeared... How sad.

I trusted you,
And you trusted me too.
You left me out of nowhere,
And gave me a pain I cant bare.

I want to back to how it used be,
Between you and me.
I know that wont happen,
We'll never talk again.

It was nice,
But it wont happen twice.
I will do everything it takes,
I 've learned from my mistakes.

I will not fall for you again.

The End.

skater94
July 11th, 2011, 03:00 AM
i liked the rhyme! :)

LifeisLife
July 18th, 2011, 02:18 AM
thank you (:

Angel Androgynous
July 18th, 2011, 03:25 AM
I like it! Nice rythm and rhyme! (: ^_^ Good job.

LifeisLife
July 18th, 2011, 09:09 AM
thank youuu! :)