zuluman78
July 6th, 2011, 09:42 AM
A soul/blues song i wrote- criticism please :D
(Verse 1)What can i substitute for this feeling of mine?
Gives me a thrill i just cant deny
Starts with a wiif, then sniff the a puff that takes me so high, up into the sky-oh such an addiction, an addiction to you
makes me so blue
(Chorus)
You got me love struck and love drink with you x3
And there's nothin i can do...
(Verse 2) Been 5 days since been with you
I'm all alone, loosing my mind
Sanity is going by time
What am i going to do? , nothing is as good as you
nothing is as good as you...
(Verse 1)What can i substitute for this feeling of mine?
Gives me a thrill i just cant deny
Starts with a wiif, then sniff the a puff that takes me so high, up into the sky-oh such an addiction, an addiction to you
makes me so blue
(Chorus)
You got me love struck and love drink with you x3
And there's nothin i can do...
(Verse 2) Been 5 days since been with you
I'm all alone, loosing my mind
Sanity is going by time
What am i going to do? , nothing is as good as you
nothing is as good as you...