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1_21Guns
July 2nd, 2011, 08:01 PM
What is it child?
Is it the past,
Is it your future?
Why are you so afraid?

There's nothing out here but hypocrisy and hate,
Nothing you haven't faced,
By now haven't you learnt to bite your lip and enjoy the pain?
Why are you so afraid?

Don't you see child,
The world was black long before you had eyes.
Those fairytales and dreams will never save you now.
Is that why you're so afraid?

One day the person in the mirror won't be you,
And there's going to be nobody to reassure you,
Hold you and tell you it's all okay.
Is that why you're so afraid?

Time stops for nobody little one,
There's no stars to wish on as the sky is black,
And the lights are in your head just like everything else you think you know.
Why are you so afraid, child?


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random crap forever pouring out of my head I s'pose

Dimitri
July 2nd, 2011, 08:03 PM
The harsh realities, the details are amazing in my eyes. You paint such a picture.

1_21Guns
July 2nd, 2011, 08:04 PM
Thankyou, maybe I should start writing again :P

Dimitri
July 2nd, 2011, 08:04 PM
I think it would benifit you to do so, you seem to have a gift for doing so.

1_21Guns
July 2nd, 2011, 08:05 PM
thankyou, that means a lot :)

Dimitri
July 2nd, 2011, 08:05 PM
I give credit where credit is due.

Magenta
July 2nd, 2011, 08:32 PM
I agree with Robert. That was wonderful, Nat. You should definitely write more. :)

Iris
July 2nd, 2011, 10:06 PM
it's beautiful

Love.Hate
July 5th, 2011, 07:03 AM
Awwh i love this. I think you should start writing more too! :)