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bmb09
June 27th, 2011, 09:44 PM
I love to draw and wanted to know what some of you guys thought about my art...

http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/050/3/b/3bbb097f1235f7025023a53871542d1d-d39w2l8.jpg




http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2010/161/1/2/Chest__Finished__D_by_knightbmb.jpg





http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2011/088/8/c/tina_by_knightbmb-d3crtde.jpg
Sage
June 27th, 2011, 09:54 PM
First picture: Something about the hair seems extremely flat and unnatural.
Second picture: I can't speak too much on anatomical correctness, but the neck seems very small and your lines seem too harsh and rigid. It doesn't seem natural in appearance or smooth in the drawing process.
Third picture: Why is part of her head missing?

Your sketches don't seem very sketchy.
starbrite5
June 28th, 2011, 11:16 PM
You have facial proportions down pretty well. I agree that the hair seems flat. I think my biggest tip is to stop smudging. When you stop smudging, your mark comes through and develops.
RisaLeigh16
June 29th, 2011, 10:41 AM
I think these pictures are really good
Magus
June 29th, 2011, 11:10 AM
They are not bad, honestly. But, for the hair, if you are going to use values, then use values for hairs and not one-line strokes to represent hair.
RoseyCadaver
June 29th, 2011, 03:33 PM
Not bad at all =).I think they look rather good,but the hair could have a little texture them.Besides that,the two faces look pretty good :).


I do think the body could have a little bit better proportion to it,but again,not bad
bmb09
July 2nd, 2011, 11:36 AM
First picture: Something about the hair seems extremely flat and unnatural.
Second picture: I can't speak too much on anatomical correctness, but the neck seems very small and your lines seem too harsh and rigid. It doesn't seem natural in appearance or smooth in the drawing process.
Third picture: Why is part of her head missing?

Your sketches don't seem very sketchy.

Part of her head isn't missing, its just the light of the scan didn't pick it up.
Sage
July 2nd, 2011, 09:27 PM
Part of her head isn't missing, its just the light of the scan didn't pick it up.

The other criticisms are still valid.
ImCoolBeans
July 3rd, 2011, 02:21 PM
the hair lacks flow, otherwise i think you draw faces very well. but as people said about the body, the lines are very rigid and it doesn't look natural.

i like your drawings though :)
anyone50
July 8th, 2012, 05:15 PM
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