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Twistember
June 20th, 2011, 12:15 AM
'Mirror At Midnight'

I'm looking in the mirror at midnight
I see messy hair
and dark circles under my eyes
they can't be mine

I see two earrings in my left ear
but only one in my right
a cross necklace dangling from the neck
of a confused little girl
who doesn't know what she believes in

I look down and see my arm
and a few scars
where they came from....
I do not wish to say

I look down even further
and see a body
that I do not desire

Then I look back at the mirror
I see hair in my face
and a tear rolling down my cheek

The things you realize
when you look in the mirror at midnight

Iris
June 21st, 2011, 07:20 PM
i can ttly relate. good poem!

Sogeking
June 21st, 2011, 07:52 PM
Great Poem :)

Fiction
June 22nd, 2011, 09:04 AM
I can really relate to this poem... yeah bad memories of sitting in front of mirrors late at night ><

User Deleted
June 22nd, 2011, 10:23 AM
Yeah, good job :D

CryWolf
June 28th, 2011, 12:04 AM
I like this. I really hate mirrors. Have since I was 10. This one strikes a chord. Nice job