Roses are red vilest are blue poem

[MissyLou]

Roses are Red Vilest are Blue.
when ever I’m asleep all I think of is you
with your beautiful blue eyes
your good sends of hummer
our lovely bold hair
I wish I was your girls friend
but I’m invisible to you

[Totality]

Good Poem

But before you post, I recommend you spell-check as there is some simple mistakes in there and proofread it.

Other than that,

Sounds good.