How does it look now ?

[tav18]

I did my best this time i drew the water with a bit more detail, and the smoke to look more realistic I also added stars and a background and was able to fit the whole picture in one try i drew the break area with a bit more realisim and more cleaner than my last one- tell me what you think and if there's anything I can do differently let me know- Thanks:)

[Origami]

I like the extra detail, but the stars ruin it. They don't look good at all. Try something simple like clouds next time. They're very easy to do.
Also, the smoke and water do look more realistic, much better than before.

Aside from that, it's just a matter of perfecting your shading, fixing minute details and physics, and learning silhouettes over stick figures.

[Magus]

For the people, use mass drawing. It's simple, yet mimics the real thing.

[tav18]

I was thinking about not putting the stars at first, but i put them anyway because i thought they would create some sort of vast atmosphere.

[Origami]

Sorry to say, it didn't work. Almost looks like smoldering ash aloft in the air.

[TrAnSMaN09]

HOLY CRAP!!!!! :eek:

How did you do that!

[Teen Vinny]

Haha, nice. I'd get some deep shadows in it and add a little contrast. This could look like true art if you made your people less stick-like and more blocky

[tav18]

Here I made some changes on photo gallery, along with some new drawings.

[FearsomeEnder]

I really like it when the ship is breaking you have chaos but in that chaos you can make out things theres water some people lots of hidden things

[afronteboi]

Really good, your'e much better than I am, I think that's a super job man.

[Charlotte93]

I really love them all there super amazing

[Tiggz]

i think it looks good i like the detail n it

[Upintheair]

It looks awesome!! I am super impressed! Good work!