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tav18
June 13th, 2011, 07:15 AM
Can someone show me how to put my artwork on here i really like to show it and I think you guys will gasp when you see it ! ?
Origami
June 13th, 2011, 08:37 AM
Upload it to photobucket.com or tinypic.com or add it as an attachment.
tav18
June 13th, 2011, 09:08 AM
Here are some pictures of Titanic-I hope you like them this is all i really ever draw that and the twin towers !
Origami
June 13th, 2011, 10:01 AM
Well, it most certainly doesn't make me gasp.
The first one is very nice; however, you could have done a lot more. The clashing of the boat and water looks far too unreal, as does the calmness of the sea and smoke pillars. Work on giving the piece more dynamics, some kind of life or excitement. It's far to dull for a ship on the ocean. Also, you did nothing with the sky. Clouds, the sun, the moon, anything. Detail it up a bit more. When shading a black area, go in one direction or use a shading technique such as hatching or cross-hatching.
In the second, the stick people annoy me. They should have been silhouettes. That really just seems like a lack of effort. Also, work on your shading to give the picture some kind of mood. Again, the smoke and sky are severely lacking.
The third is very busy, and it has a lot of life. But it looks as if you put minimal effort into some of the areas.
tav18
June 13th, 2011, 10:13 AM
Thank you for your kind suggestions- i will work on it when i can :)
- can you explain to me what are sihouettes ?- or what they look like?
Origami
June 13th, 2011, 10:58 AM
A silhouette is basically a blacked out image of someone. Imagine seeing someone walk up to you, but they have a very bright light behind them. You see no detail on them whatsoever, it's almost as if a shadow is walking towards you. It's just that, a blacked out drawing of a figure.
Examples:
http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/d/d5/Band_Silhouette_03.jpg
http://www.au.af.mil/au/awc/cliparmy/1-1b.gif
http://www.silhouettesclipart.com/images/Chicken-%20Hen-roosters-silhouette.jpg
tav18
June 13th, 2011, 11:27 AM
Thanks i'll try to show you one and you can tell me if it looks right to you :)
Origami
June 13th, 2011, 11:42 AM
Alright.
tav18
June 13th, 2011, 01:16 PM
I'm not good at drawing people- but heres one i drew tell me what you think about it :)
Origami
June 13th, 2011, 01:17 PM
You've got the concept, but it looks more like a robot. Work on anatomical proportions and shapes. People are hard, but one of the most rewarding drawing skills.
tav18
June 13th, 2011, 01:44 PM
Thanks - i'll work on it sometime:yes:
PoseidonX43
June 16th, 2011, 10:22 PM
Here are some pictures of Titanic-I hope you like them this is all i really ever draw that and the twin towers !
dang u such a great drawer
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