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Mannequin
January 31st, 2007, 04:54 PM
Fervid lights blend into skin
burning down everything within.
Light destroys, heat ends.
We close our eyes to cool our skin.

Weeks become months--
months become years.
Nonsense provokes reaction,
reaction-led tears.

Ominous night lights pass
Railroad darkness sets in.
You look into the night--
the skylights are there again.


The whole poem is actually a metaphor for someone that I love. They serve as the skylights ; always there, yet always virtually curbstomping my heart.

schrei jess
January 31st, 2007, 05:30 PM
You posted this before, but Ill say it again, very beautiful writing - great language, youre a natural :)

Bankai15
January 31st, 2007, 05:31 PM
Bravo!