More Manga Stuff

[CheshCat]

Last post promise but i just found some drawings and i wondered if they were any good?

My Vampyre Bride before i threw her away :wub: I origanally made her upset but my girlfriend at the time made her happy for me, hehe :')

http://a8.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc6/168337_101220249957946_100002099131168_7558_3979084_n.jpg

My High School Girl my first happy drawing :P :wub::wub:
(But my 'friend' drew all over her =.=)

http://a2.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash1/180599_101222163291088_100002099131168_7571_1356977_n.jpg

My Up close Crying eye <3

http://a3.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc6/169087_101222396624398_100002099131168_7576_2237720_n.jpg


This was done on a happy day later that day it only got worse but the time it lasted was good </3

http://a3.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc6/183572_105372969542674_100002099131168_48126_1778830_n.jpg

Bonne Lapin - Happy Bunny

http://a8.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc6/225629_121381667941804_100002099131168_166482_1369199_n.jpg

Sorry there are so many but i tend to go overboard XD <3 :wub:
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[BrokenXPaperXDolls]

OMG the bottom one is like my avatar lol

i love them lots:D u have great talent

[darkwoon]

- My Vampyre Bride has strong proportion and structure issues. Suggestion: draw a simple structure of your character first, then flesh it out - it is much easier to spot structural weaknesses. The eyes are quite frightening... I wouldn't bet this smile isn't actually a smirk just before the bride bites her husband in the neck! :D

- High school girl I the best one of those, I think - it is not perfect, but it is definitely not bad. Again, I think starting by drawing a rough sketch of the skeleton would have helped you to get a better overall structure.

- Crying eye: the shape is good, but you should try to work on making better shadowing/coloring. If you are using a pen, try to crosshatch (darken an area with lines crossing each other, make more/closer lines for darker areas). If you are using a pencil, try to get smoother coloring (leave no white stripes, make the pencil strokes as invisible as possible - it is best to apply less pressure on your pencil and apply several layers on a darker surface).

- Smile: plain fun! :D

- Bonne Lapin (I guess that would be a "Zombie Lapin" for us Frenchies, given its look!): Good reproduction that shows that you already have a good control over your lines.

I'd say: sketch the structures first, and I'm sure you'll quickly get very good results. Don't spend too much time copying existing pics - instead, watch them carefully, and try to guess their underlying structures, so you can reuse them in your own originals.

Nice job overall!

[FearsomeEnder]

omg i love anime and these are amazering

[Charlotte93]

I loveeee the last one it's soooo detailed