CheshCat
June 3rd, 2011, 08:25 PM
Just a poem i wrote, it's probably no good but oh well :wub: Feedback welcome (Sorry if i posted it in the wrong place i'm no good with technology!!)
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My cold steel friend,
Upon seeing you my troubles seemed to mend.
Little drops of pure red delight,
My mind put to rest no need to fight.
This little habit gives me the help I need to keep going,
It gives me strength when I see that crimson colour flowing.
My head knows i shouldn't..
I should really stop digging in...but I couldn't..i wouldn't?
Who else would i tell, i'm isolated..alone,
I wish you were here 'cos when i look in your eyes i'm home.
But i should be able to quit this without any help from you,
I've failed to many people i know i can try my best to get through.
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Each and every one of you can survive this almost as good as new i know it seems impossible now but you can do this take all the help you can get because you're all special :) <3 TAZAI TSUYOI <3
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My cold steel friend,
Upon seeing you my troubles seemed to mend.
Little drops of pure red delight,
My mind put to rest no need to fight.
This little habit gives me the help I need to keep going,
It gives me strength when I see that crimson colour flowing.
My head knows i shouldn't..
I should really stop digging in...but I couldn't..i wouldn't?
Who else would i tell, i'm isolated..alone,
I wish you were here 'cos when i look in your eyes i'm home.
But i should be able to quit this without any help from you,
I've failed to many people i know i can try my best to get through.
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Each and every one of you can survive this almost as good as new i know it seems impossible now but you can do this take all the help you can get because you're all special :) <3 TAZAI TSUYOI <3