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CryWolf
June 2nd, 2011, 11:55 AM
Who mourns for the hunter?
Who cries for the one who brings you down?
You know a prowler can still feel pain when instinct gets eluded.

Would you escape the admirer?
The eyes of the one who would claim you as prize?
It’s all a matter of relation playing out on the inside.

The scent of a stranger that reeks of the past chokes the breath of the day
Wild passion from a source of anger that moves in forms of grace
Chaos has no life here. Confusion must bow down.
Perfect calm and calamity share the lost and found.

Pulling out ahead of the pack attracts the attention giver
Showing all you have to offer; wasting nothing and wanting everything
Hopeful for the fantasy ending; happily ever after
Realizing in a moment’s notice the moment has razor teeth

Who mourns for the hunted?
Who cries for you while you are falling down?
You know a victim will feel more pain as wishes get eluded.

Would you attack the admirer?
The tears coming out of your un-blinded eyes?
It’s all a matter of reflection coming in from the outside.

beardedboy
June 9th, 2011, 02:52 PM
Another wonderful and deep piece. I enjoyed this one too. :) You are pretty good at this, is it what you want to do in the future? Keep it up :)

CryWolf
June 10th, 2011, 11:25 AM
Thanks for the nice feedback man. Yeah I think I'll always write. It's a pressure valve. Being in a band has helped to communicate in ways. So yeah I'd like to keep doing it. Thanks again for your feedback! :)